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She said it once, she said it twice. The doctor blinked, his expression uncomprehending of such a request from one so young.
'I'm sorry,' he apologised again, a slight frown pulling at his eyebrows, 'Could you repeat that?'
Absent-mindedly, the girl picked at a loose thread in her clothing, 'I want you to cut out my heart,' she answered for the third time, 'I want you to cut it out and I want you to give it to someone else, someone who can really use it, appreciate it.'
No less baffled, the doctor shook his head, 'But... but why...?'
'I think it's dead,' the girl replied, her tone emotionless, 'Or, at least, staying in this body kills it. My soul cannot sustain my heart. Not anymore.'
Intrigue tainting his professionalism, the doctor leaned across his desk, 'And what makes you say that...?'
Meeting his inquisitive gaze evenly, the girl said, 'At first it only hurt a little bit. That was when life started to go bad. My brother got sick, but all the doctors promised it would be okay. Only it never did, he never improved. In spite of that though, we all hoped.'
Nodding, the doctor motioned with his hand for her to continue.
'Gradually, I got used to the hospitals, to the long white corridors, I even became immune to the blood transfusions. But the near misses always threw me. I hated the idea of my poor brother participating in such a delicate dance with death.' She stopped, 'However one day the near miss wasn't quite a near miss...'
'Your brother died?' the doctor said, his voice echoing with unspoken condolences.
'Yes. That was when my heart really started to throb. Each morning I'd wake up, and expect to see a tattered hole in my chest. Or worse, discover one day that my heart had ceased to beat altogether, I had nightmares of it rotting inside me.' Continued the girl, 'But I survived that. It was hard, but I and my heart survived that. We had a funeral for my brother, and even the sky cried. The graveyard was a black sea of mourning souls that day, but I am not idealistic, I imagine that the graveyard is often like that. To that place, my brother is just another body in the ground. Just more rot.'
Adjusting his glasses, the doctor asked, 'Was it the funeral that 'killed' your heart?'
'No.' The girl said frankly, 'It was my parents who did that, not that I blame them. I suppose they had weaker hearts than I. After my brother's funeral they drifted away from each other, and into themselves. Their relationship didn't crash and burn like in the movies, it just collapsed. Like a cardboard box left out in the rain... Only this time,' the girl placed her hand over her chest, 'My heart didn't hurt. From that day on I have been free from the suffering caused by emotions, but I have tasted no happiness either. That is why I wish to give away my heart.'
Offering her a stethoscope, the doctor asked, 'Would you like to listen to your heart? To prove to yourself that it's alive and beating?'
But the girl pushed the medical instrument away, 'No. You do not understand. It's not that my heart doesn't beat, it does beat, and it works fine. It's just that I don't need it. I feel no emotion, I need no heart. Someone else out there needs it more than me, I know it.'
Leaning back in his chair, the doctor studied the girl, 'That's rather an original outlook on things,' he murmured to himself.
Staring at her feet, the girl whispered, 'My brother died because he needed a heart transplant.'
The doctor closed his eyes, 'I see.'
'If someone like me had given him a heart then he'd still be here today.' She finished.
'Do you think though, that having died, your brother would wish for you to follow in his footsteps?' questioned the doctor.
Smiling slightly at the audacity of the query, the girl said, 'No, of course not.'
Within her chest, a stale sensation stirred. It was warm, and yellow like melted butter, slowly, it began to thaw her cold, beating heart.
The doctor grinned too, his brown eyes wrinkling at the corners, 'What is that you feel?'
And she looked up to him, and she cried, warm, joyous tears of rediscovered happiness, 'I think it's my brother,' she choked, 'Living inside of me, in my heart. He always used to make me laugh, and now I feel like laughing.'
'Yes,' agreed the doctor, standing up and embracing the quivering child, 'I think it must be.'
'I'm sorry,' he apologised again, a slight frown pulling at his eyebrows, 'Could you repeat that?'
Absent-mindedly, the girl picked at a loose thread in her clothing, 'I want you to cut out my heart,' she answered for the third time, 'I want you to cut it out and I want you to give it to someone else, someone who can really use it, appreciate it.'
No less baffled, the doctor shook his head, 'But... but why...?'
'I think it's dead,' the girl replied, her tone emotionless, 'Or, at least, staying in this body kills it. My soul cannot sustain my heart. Not anymore.'
Intrigue tainting his professionalism, the doctor leaned across his desk, 'And what makes you say that...?'
Meeting his inquisitive gaze evenly, the girl said, 'At first it only hurt a little bit. That was when life started to go bad. My brother got sick, but all the doctors promised it would be okay. Only it never did, he never improved. In spite of that though, we all hoped.'
Nodding, the doctor motioned with his hand for her to continue.
'Gradually, I got used to the hospitals, to the long white corridors, I even became immune to the blood transfusions. But the near misses always threw me. I hated the idea of my poor brother participating in such a delicate dance with death.' She stopped, 'However one day the near miss wasn't quite a near miss...'
'Your brother died?' the doctor said, his voice echoing with unspoken condolences.
'Yes. That was when my heart really started to throb. Each morning I'd wake up, and expect to see a tattered hole in my chest. Or worse, discover one day that my heart had ceased to beat altogether, I had nightmares of it rotting inside me.' Continued the girl, 'But I survived that. It was hard, but I and my heart survived that. We had a funeral for my brother, and even the sky cried. The graveyard was a black sea of mourning souls that day, but I am not idealistic, I imagine that the graveyard is often like that. To that place, my brother is just another body in the ground. Just more rot.'
Adjusting his glasses, the doctor asked, 'Was it the funeral that 'killed' your heart?'
'No.' The girl said frankly, 'It was my parents who did that, not that I blame them. I suppose they had weaker hearts than I. After my brother's funeral they drifted away from each other, and into themselves. Their relationship didn't crash and burn like in the movies, it just collapsed. Like a cardboard box left out in the rain... Only this time,' the girl placed her hand over her chest, 'My heart didn't hurt. From that day on I have been free from the suffering caused by emotions, but I have tasted no happiness either. That is why I wish to give away my heart.'
Offering her a stethoscope, the doctor asked, 'Would you like to listen to your heart? To prove to yourself that it's alive and beating?'
But the girl pushed the medical instrument away, 'No. You do not understand. It's not that my heart doesn't beat, it does beat, and it works fine. It's just that I don't need it. I feel no emotion, I need no heart. Someone else out there needs it more than me, I know it.'
Leaning back in his chair, the doctor studied the girl, 'That's rather an original outlook on things,' he murmured to himself.
Staring at her feet, the girl whispered, 'My brother died because he needed a heart transplant.'
The doctor closed his eyes, 'I see.'
'If someone like me had given him a heart then he'd still be here today.' She finished.
'Do you think though, that having died, your brother would wish for you to follow in his footsteps?' questioned the doctor.
Smiling slightly at the audacity of the query, the girl said, 'No, of course not.'
Within her chest, a stale sensation stirred. It was warm, and yellow like melted butter, slowly, it began to thaw her cold, beating heart.
The doctor grinned too, his brown eyes wrinkling at the corners, 'What is that you feel?'
And she looked up to him, and she cried, warm, joyous tears of rediscovered happiness, 'I think it's my brother,' she choked, 'Living inside of me, in my heart. He always used to make me laugh, and now I feel like laughing.'
'Yes,' agreed the doctor, standing up and embracing the quivering child, 'I think it must be.'
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Introduction
"Hey"
"Do I know you?"
"No, but I know you."
"What?"
"Yea, you're the girl whose boyfriend cheated on her"
"Excuse me?"
"And he tore you into pieces and broke your heart and you've never been able to trust
again."
"I don't know what you're talking about."
"You're the girl whose parents got separated living in one house and then the other."
"How do you..."
"You're the girl whose friends betrayed her. They just toyed around with you until they found out you were no use for them anymore and let you hanging"
"STOP IT!" Her eyes stinging with tears
"You're the girl who lied to her mom to go to parties."
"That is not true.
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Just Friends
You look at him,
He looks at you.
All you can do is look away
Because whenever you look at him
You realize he'll never be yours.
And one day you're going to lose him
To a girl who's better than you,
Prettier than you.
No matter how much you wish before going to sleep
No matter how much you dream of being his
He'll never be yours.
Every time you close your eyes
You see the same pair of green eyes,
And that same mysteriously shy smile.
That makes your heart skip a beat
He's perfect, you think.
"Maybe he doesn't deserve you." They say.
Maybe,
Or maybe they've got it all wrong.
Yes, it isn't that he doesn't deserve me, it's al
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Happy
You looked. I glanced. We met. I smiled. You smiled back. A sentence here. A metaphor there. A memory we both found beyond repair. I shared. You listened. You shared. I heard. You paused. And then I kissed you.
We're happy.
Fingers pressed skin. Then danced apart. I teased. You laughed. You joked. I grinned. Stairwells were dreamcatchers. Stars were destinies. Guitars became epiphanies. More words. More memories. More to admit. More to regret. You were damaged. I was broken.
We're happy.
You stopped smiling. I didn't laugh. Words began to go unspoken. Regrets emerged. Fingers didn't touch. Lips faltered. Stairwells were nightmare holders.
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So, My friend Deborah was doing her biology, and she had this idea, and asked me to write it, but I didn't want to steal, so a long debate after, I agreed to write it and it was decided it wasn't stealing and blah blah blah
This is Deborah's condesnsed idea : It was about a girl who like had her heart hurt by people, & cut out all her emotions and decides to donate it but it's silly really
But I don't think its silly! I hope It's okay Deborah (I think I ruined it a bit )
This is Deborah's condesnsed idea : It was about a girl who like had her heart hurt by people, & cut out all her emotions and decides to donate it but it's silly really
But I don't think its silly! I hope It's okay Deborah (I think I ruined it a bit )
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I have to admit this idea was new. Your friend should study biology more. It was a brilliant read and the moment of resolution the character has at the end was quite awe-inspiring and hopeful. Well done.
Also, I love the characterisation of the doctor.
Also, I love the characterisation of the doctor.