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One day, one day when you're least expecting me, I'll swoop down and smother you. Dragging you away, we'll plunge together into that icy cold, black pool; I'll fill your lungs and I'll rot your heart.
One day I'll find you, and – for evermore – you'll never be quite the same again.
You'll learn to hate mirrors, or any other reflective surfaces, because you simply won't be able to bear looking at yourself. Every time you close your eyes I promise you that there, in the darkness, will be a faint glimmer. And that glimmer is your soul. Why is it faint? It's dead, of course. Don't you remember?
Ha. How could you possibly forget?
It's not nice, is it? Listening to my snide little voice all the time, well, let me tell you something. Are you listening? Are you sitting comfortably? No? Good.
The reason you hate to listen to me is because, and you already know this, I am you. I am all the worst possible parts of you, of your being.  All those experiences, all those things you said, everything you tried to repress, that's me.
No matter how hard you try, you'll never be rid of my presence. So, just bear that in mind, next time you speak....
Next time you speak, will you be summoning me into your life?
Guess who should be rewriting. Guess who cba?
btw, this isn't about anyone. eto.
meh.
Oui, dydy i ddim yn gallu i ysgrifennau saesneg neu cymraeg >.<
haha, ond gallaf ysgrifennau lol!!!!

Beth yw 'Guilt' yn cymraeg?
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UnbearableME Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014
:/ true 
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neonbleach Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2011
I believe it should be "bear in mind" rather than "bare in mind," but other than that, I really love all of this. It's very precise and personal without having to be formal or overly dramatic. I certainly think you've achieved what you were going for. :)
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Peghan Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
hehe, you're right. sorry :O typos are evil :XD:
Will correct it now!
Thank you! :aww:
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neonbleach Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2011
:heart:
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Peghan Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
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jellybean0926 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2011
So true! Guilt is an infectious little bugger. Beautifully written!
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:iconpeghan:
Peghan Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
ahahaha! indeed it is :XD: thank you :)
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plginbby Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2011
Wow, no seriously this is really good. Its suppose to be written to yourself right? Its amazing <3 LOVELOVELOVELOVE
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:iconpeghan:
Peghan Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :heart:
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everdeen13 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Creepy!! But very awesome, as usual. How can you say you can't write?!?!
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:iconpeghan:
Peghan Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :aww:
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everdeen13 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I THOUGHT I ASKED A QUESTION!
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:iconpeghan:
Peghan Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Did you...?
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everdeen13 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
How can you say you can't write?!
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Peghan Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, easily - 'I Can't Write' ;)
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everdeen13 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I DIDN'T MEAN LITERALLY, PAIGEY!!!
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Peghan Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
mehehehehehe ;)
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fidele7684 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2011  Student Filmographer
it shows how being one, shows all the difficulties in his life
u show him the truth, but its hard for him to endure it but he will always listen to your voice unconsciously :D LOVE IT
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Peghan Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
haha, thank you !
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fidele7684 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2011  Student Filmographer
your more than welcomed
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Isoya-star Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2011  Student Photographer
awesome stuff
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Peghan Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
thank you :meow:
lols, I need to write something with plot !!!! :O
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Isoya-star Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2011  Student Photographer
=3
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Shadowlovey Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2011  Student General Artist
YOU FORCE ME TO FAV TOO MUCH!!
your writing is too good..
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Peghan Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
aw, thank you :tighthug: and thank you for the faves as well :aww:
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Shadowlovey Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2011  Student General Artist
:huggle: you're welcome!
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Preiifull Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2011
guiltio? xD
i can't speak Welsh.. i failed my exam D:
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Peghan Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
haha! It should be-io :XD:
Meh, 'twas a stoopid examio :P
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Preiifull Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2011
haha it should :XD:
haa i know!! i still have one left as well :(
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Peghan Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Aw :( heheh *gloats*
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Preiifull Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2011
go awaaaaay ;(
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Peghan Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
*runs*
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Preiifull Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2011
i didn't mean it literally :O *runs after Paige*
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Peghan Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
*runs back* ;)
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