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The Other took The Speaker's hand.
  "Why are you holding my hand...?" the question was blown softly into the night.
"Because it proves that you are real," murmured The Other, "And I haven't held your hand in such a long time."
  "Perhaps I'm not real," smiled Speaker, "Maybe I'm just in your mind, your dreams."
"You are real," came the solid reply, "Because I love you and as long as I love you, you'll always be real."
  "You've never held my hand before, not properly," muttered The Speaker.
"Because I've never come so close to losing you," said The Other, "Those days before you left I was worried that you were imaginary. That you were too good to be true. When you came back I realised that you were real. And now I'm not scared to hold your hand anymore."
   "What if one day I don't come back....?" asked The Speaker.
"Then I'll be glad that for one day, one moment, I touched your hand and kissed your lips. I'll be glad that you were real."
    A thoughtful silence settled over the pair's head. At last The Speaker spoke again, "Do you believe in heaven?"
    There was no pause, The Other answered immediately, "No."
"Why not?" Said The Speaker.
    "Because I'm sure that heaven cannot get any better than this."
Leaning across, The Speaker kissed The Other on the lips. All around them heaven bloomed with shimmering petals and iridescent skies.
Because I never held his hand.

I'm not religious btw.

Probably will get scrapped :P
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LearningEverMore Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I love this, very sweet and cute,
Heaven is here,
all we have to do
is look.
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Peghan Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Hehe, thank you :meow:
But sometimes it's hard when the whole world seems to be going to hell, but ah well :D <inappropiate smiley face...
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LearningEverMore Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I know how hard it can be, but we will find it someday :)
you are very welcome
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Peghan Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Yes, someday we will, hopefully :)
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LearningEverMore Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:huggle:
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Peghan Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:tighthug:
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LearningEverMore Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for the favorite Sweetheart :)
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Peghan Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
No problem :aww:
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Kalistik-Cheryzia Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Aw. It's really sweet, and I like how the dialogue is poetic.
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Peghan Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
hehe, thank you :tighthug:
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